Thursday, October 25, 2007

The below

The poems below were reaped from my notebook this morning. Some I like, all are still works in progress. The top two are the oldest, back a year or so, from UVM. There were more, but they were either shiyt or require more than a whims worth of work.

3 comments:

Dacius Gentlescu said...

What stage am I on?
Why the scenery?
Why so fantastic?
Don't give me the time to grow accustomed to it
The old and the tired, the ones that fail and recede with age instead of those that are fortified by years
Stop my eyes from clouding like the most
Burn my left hand away so I can see the beauty of the right
I'll take more oblivion if it helps me see what's been missing
Though I've lacked for so long on the left, but fill the spot and I would believe
You've given your conditions, now you have mine
I'm sorry I can't be less human

Dacius Gentlescu said...

And Death speaks wisely in the words that bite
The vital and the matter speak over and over but it's fake, they are stuttering
The Truth is in Death
He's talking about what will always be
The world mumbles about what could
And never really is

Dacius Gentlescu said...

Bed warmth and rain light
Smooth and disturbing
The cold caress is only in your chest
Though, I'm sorry for the distress
This is the best
That you've got
Could have made it all you would?
I can't tell you
I fought the greedy drops grey goodness
I burned against the skin that might
I fought you tooth and nail
And you proved yourself the best
For once
But I'm still there and I'll ruin memory if there is nothing else
Forget the sweetness regret all the rest
This you will do
So says the coldness in your chest